[REQUEST] Brand New Website - Your Critiques?

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Hi guys,
I just put together this website this morning.

http://www.flcomputer.com/

My intended market is small-time gigs, preferably repeat customers. As I am aiming for a less tech savvy demographic, I've kept the technical language intentionally thin.
Anyhow, what do you think? Is it easy enough to read? Professional, yet friendly?
Is the Request a Quote section easy enough for a customer to find?
Thanks for any and all feedback. I've only got about three hours of work into it so far, so constructive criticism definitely won't hurt my feelings.
 
Few things which will really help you out here.

Theres no contact number on your home page. Have it nice and large.

Services. Have a page for each and every service you offer. Seo the heck out of each of these. Also have a contact us form on each service page. Rather than having the client go to your contact me page.

the contact me, and request a service page, are basically one and the same thing.

I see nothing re your terms and conditions.
 
Agree with what Nige says. Get your phone number up top rather than at bottom. I recommend some good headlines that catch the readers attention or hit a pain point with them and how your going to solve that pain point. Your services page feels more like an About Us page. I would create a service menu with a page for each site like Nige suggested and optimise each of them to a specific keyword.
If you havent already get a plugin called Yoast SEO and this will tell you what is lacking in terms of SEO for each page. Things like your focus key word and meta descriptions, word count ect. Plenty of topics on this - i have self taught myself and it can take time but like a seed if you plant it, water it and look after it then it will grow and build you more traffic.

The layout looks good just build on your content.

Careful leaving emails displayed on page- spammers will pick this up and spam the heck out of your mailbox. The Request a Quote is easy enough to find and form looks good.
 
Good suggestions guys, I'll be sure to implement them.
Regarding Yoast SEO - I've used that before at a previous job, but this is just a simple SquareSpace page, not Wordpress based.
I'll have to go with a different SEO strategy. I am most likely going to purchase some Google Adwords once I've got a few profitable jobs under my belt.
 
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