What you think about my business card(s)

[hightechrex]

1st Drafts (Made these myself)
Comments, thoughts, concerns?

(Favorite)
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/69/logo2ye.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/195/logogqv.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/827/29597977.jpg/

 

[14049752]

The cards don't say what you do. You shouldn't expect that to be implied.

Edit: Also, your site has some grammar problems...even though you didn't ask.

 

[hightechrex]

The cards don't say what you do. You shouldn't expect that to be implied.

Edit: Also, your site has some grammar problems...even though you didn't ask.

Ok, the business card I can fix now. The website is still being fixed; I can't get to that right now. Any critiques on the design aspects of both site and cards?

 

[mraikes]

Use caps in your web address to improve quick readability: www.FirstLetterCapitalized.com

 

[Rodrigy]

when I see the dinosaur, I think you sell toys.

 

[hightechrex]

when I see the dinosaur, I think you sell toys.

There's a whole 7 page thread about the logo. Its controversial. Some liked it and some didn't. I decided to go with it.

 

[iisjman07]

As stated, you need to mention you repair computers. Don't rely on people phoning or visiting your website when they don't know what you do. Other than that, I agree that the first one is the prettiest.

 

[hightechrex]

As stated, you need to mention you repair computers. Don't rely on people phoning or visiting your website when they don't know what you do. Other than that, I agree that the first one is the prettiest.

Thats what the back of the card is going to be for. Didn't want to put too much on the front. I just added "Premium Tech Support" under the logo and "Lead PC Technician" on the front. The back will be filled with more information.

Here's another asessing the changes posted.

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